08 April, 2010

500 words of shades and shadow

NOTE: The quoteThere is no blue without yellow and without orange.” By -Vincent Van Gogh have inspired this prose in exact 500 words unfolding the shadow and shades of life and in life!
Shades and Shadow
~ 500 words of shades and shadow ~

It sometimes and at times likes this…
No matter how good you do, all turns upside down in loop.
However counter apart comes back with relief.
Liberating Life is all about it, get ready to feel it!

Huh...what a weirdo life dude!
Desperation was very much there in every act.
There is no orange without yellow and without red!
And how well the different shades sink within,

I look for the moment.
Moments those intervene with the spark and ember ignition,
Look. Here! This matters right now!
Do you see how gorgeous this moment was…or perhaps is!

Giving a shot to those around us in tiny gratitude glimpse..
Ordinary yet they are the events of life
Tiring but the twists of tales with teeny tears piers!
Marvel over the motion and create the Moments!

What if, its hitch yet pretending all is fine..
It gives the strength to fight from morning five to evening nine
What if, not served and raised to never praise,
Bracing to steal firmness and always sail…

For the sweet spirit I swear in
To yearn the strong soul with in
And the phenomenal blessings cling in!
Wow…well wait, the world so weird ways..

I wish to wind, bind and rewind words
I could have...but am chocking within alive cords
Honesty preferred though how hard it hurts
Maybe I'd know what to do next or at the first

It is a slice, rare and bloom in adverse
It is a smell that care the memoirs
It is a taste that feels the keen earnest
It is a mistake yet defined learning
It is an utter sheer scrupulous life!

Take off the hook
Wake up, compete and chase the cheer
With content outright outcome
Regret reduced,
Returned to the roots
Remove the weeds
Worrying awhile and not a while
Life lies here in everything in the enough!

And just like the smallest speck of dust,
The ray of sunshine spears the curtain,
I know I could have celebrated and cherished,
I could talk for hours and get thunderstruck
Or stay still and silent for ages,

Somehow such still keeps me awake speechless
Confused creepy tanned if it was dust or just a dash of instant
An echo in white yet so blank halo sight!
Life is weird or wonderful or an illusion…doubts arise

When it’s Over it’s over, it is over,
Yet covers the crowd and few clouds,
Sloppy are many clowns and a cower,
Creating caprice castle,
Curious ceremonies and
Influencing colors,
Casual clear yet comparing,
Life is a chronicle,
Starts when edge ends or ends when lead starts.

Refreshing replenishing…O dear its verve!
The Rover riding on the rolling stone and roaring is me,
Life tenet and weird world theory just so aimlessly destined!
To the sunny side of the living and leaving bewilder behind!!

Celebrations woven, dimensions knitted and vibrations unite!
Seeking, structuring and sheath serene senses
Life amalgamate with some sweets and some sweat
Some shadow and several sparkling shaded essences…Ahh...An Esteem life!

17 comments:

  1. I love this creative shades of yours girl.

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  2. Love the blog design..layout.. colourful and yes, filled with butterfliesss...yipeee!!

    gonna blogroll u :))

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  3. wow..i was totally amazed..the irony of words and how you describe the sensation and the way of life is totally amazing~

    esp. these lines wowed me :)
    "It is a slice, rare and bloom in adverse
    It is a smell that care the memoirs
    It is a taste that feels the keen earnest
    It is a mistake yet defined learning
    It is an utter sheer scrupulous life!"

    keep on writing~!!

    and btw..your request granted!!:D

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  4. @ Priya

    So glad that you liked it..! You came back after a long time...where were you..huh..SO much missed you:)

    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  5. @ Aaarti

    Yeah..butterflies..are inspiriang and hence I simply love them..So happy to know that you like the design and layout of HUmming Today!

    Thankyou for teh wonderful words:)

    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  6. @ Ayu

    Perhaps..you been the only one who understood teh hidden meaning of the sliding words in the prose...Yeah it's an irony yet we never forget to Smile at the end!

    You and your words definitely brought the smile back to my lips:)


    Luv yeah always:)Indeed you drawings are devine..Loved the shaded you gave to your drawings:)

    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  7. Beautiful work Rachana :)
    You create wonders with words.

    Keep up the good work buddy!!

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  8. Hi Rachana
    Its really ages after i have restarted writing and visiting blogs...nvr knew it wd be so rewarding!!!
    ur poetic senses has bloomed fully with colors so graphic and tempting that i really loved it...

    When it’s Over it’s over, it is over,
    Yet covers the crowd and few clouds,
    Sloppy are many clowns and a cower,
    Creating caprice castle,
    Curious ceremonies and
    Influencing colors,
    Casual clear yet comparing,
    Life is a chronicle,
    Starts when edge ends or ends when lead starts.

    I am wondering the state of ur mind while penning these lines...keep writing! It works really.

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  9. WOW! it was really amazing! loved these lines~
    Marvel over the motion and create the Moments!

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  10. @Rachana

    ~Was that picture of your home? Or taken in front of your home?

    ~I am dumb when it comes to poetry...I can write the funniest poems and bollywood songs anyone can imagine.

    ~Do we dislike the same color or different shades of the same color?

    We like some shades in all the colors and emotions in people but tend to corner ourselves when it comes to extremes.

    Keep on the shipping..

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  11. @ Chatterbox

    It is beautiful feeling to always read your comment! It sure encourages me a lot:)


    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  12. @ Vishal

    So glad to find your comment:) after such a long time! Yeah..missed your lavishing commnets but not anymore..hope are back to blogsphere with your creative lines:)


    Also it is wonderful you kinda liked few lines from the post/prose!And yeah m still in blooming stage so there is still a scope of churn and creativity!!

    Nothing like state of mind...i was kinda going through other's life situation..which provoked me to this..! M just fine still same n rocking! dont u worry!

    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  13. @ Tharangni

    Hey absolute my pleasure! Good to know that you liked it..as words from a poet are simply worthy!

    Thanks for reading honey!


    Luv yeah!
    ~Keep the Spark Alive..

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  14. @ Mitul

    ~ Thats the picture of my old house:) It was a wonderful home with coconut tree leaves in my balcony...perhaps it was 2nd floor!

    ~ dont you worry..I'm not a poet ! :P

    ~ You said very true..we love different shades of same color! Okay it was colors!

    ~ Slide changes are also shades in life!

    ~ How about I say, that "I love standing in shade" and we all look for certain trustworthy warm shade/shelters!

    ~ However, a Shadow is also termed as shade sometimes!


    So glad you commented and went through such a lenghty post..!Hope you found the above lines interesting!!

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  15. @Rachi

    My Pleasure...

    We love shadow in the midst of bright sunlight and love our JOURNEY full of wonderful turns and slopes...

    Our JOURNEY would be dull if it was a one straight road....

    That is why i like Indian Roads full of a bumpy ride...Well let me stop otherwise I will start commenting rubbish things...

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  16. “There is no blue without yellow and without orange.” By -Vincent Van Gogh

    My University's colors are yellow and blue...and now with the green initiatives I read the above quote on a wall at my uni...

    wondering...

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  17. Oh Gurl ! Amazing!!! Unbelievable write up in 30 mins...

    I LUVD the way u hv used Alliteration...especially in d last para.

    A positive wind up makes it good.

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