20 June, 2010

Captivating Sight - 88 fiction

Note: 55 Fictions is precise form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. Yet this one is in 88 words-limit..



Fiction 88
~ Captivating Sight ~

Every time I went out,
I found this strange old man on the street.
Sometimes, he would just come near me
and invoke blessings on my head
with his conjure gesture.
*
Yet occasionally,
I didn’t like him despite his gratifying behavior
because
I knew he had inexorably cashed on,
 out of his hardship.
*
For there are opportunities for him
to work much harder with other people like him
but he found conveniently profitable,
the begging.
*
It was difficult to resist his captivating sight...
..though I knew he was blind.

Eyes

7 comments:

  1. oh wow...that was really...sad and great!!

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  2. touching post...
    hard hitting...
    reveals the prejudiced society's quick conclusions....
    liked the narration and the words...
    u did hit the bull's eye this time...

    grt effort indeed ...
    wanna read more micro fictions from you....


    keep writing buddy
    cheers:)

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  3. Very touching! Good observation, and beautiful flow of words.

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  4. Oh my... such a touching post... those eyes and the last line hit me really hard... awesome post

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  5. ohh my ... that is such a touching post... those eyes and the last line hit me really hard... awesome post...

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