10 February, 2012

Someone is Special - Haiku

messed up day turns up memorable day

The picture below is taken from a Hindi serial 'iss pyar ko kya naam doon' featuring on channel StarPlus.


I melted away
Burning down
The darkness
Light up the Life
Fenced in boundaries
Build the bridges wide
Messed up all long day
And with someone special too
Love way you still love

I was fussed in drawing lines
Crossed to get Closure
Countdown begins here
Many momentous moments
Few messiest merrily
Awaited to count!



7 comments:

  1. 'I melted away
    Burning down
    The darkness
    Light up the Life
    Fenced in boundaries
    Build the bridges wide
    Messed up all long day
    And with someone special too
    Love way you still love
    I was fussed in drawing lines
    Crossed to get Closure
    Countdown begins here
    Many momentous moments
    Awaited to count!'

    No words can match your Haiku and the words to beautify it. I've a idea...

    'Love Unconditional! CELEBRATE LIFE..' - Only your words can beautify your words.. Let many momentous moments come this way:-) SmileS :-)

    Someone is Special

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  2. 'a messy merry awaited to count' How can you come up with such beautiful lines.... I really find difficult to type a comment for you, so five out out of five stars to you :-)

    Someone is Special

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  3. I mean it is now clear like sky.... what a weaver of words you are..may you keep meeting a better you every day.. RS :)

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  4. Wonderfully crafted poem with a haiku in the middle. Can I do a suggestion? Maybe you highlight the haiku or make it an other color. I had some problems to find the haiku first time reading this poem of yours.

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  5. As long as messy can lead you to love...~ nice story ~

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  6. You're a wonderful weaver of words, indeed!
    I LIKE LIKE LIKE this! :D :)

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  7. I liked this one, words in this article.

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