07 February, 2012

Rollicking Affair - Valentines Day sayings

just as you said...Be my Valentine!


So why do I love You?
Because,
The night is so dark with shattering twinkle stars
A long and long night waiting to get over staring moon beaming behind the clouds
To get over the night and get closure to you, Dreaming only of you!
I thought, a longing night is a long trail of recollecting old felt memories with you!

Because,
The sunlight did not ask before brightening my room and delighting my day,
While facing the warm sun with eyes closed,
And sun gazing me is worthwhile,
I thought, I was kissing you with closed eyes!

Because,
The lightening behind the bamboo blind fits within the frame of an opened window,
Digging my room into the darkness
While I heard a rumble of loud thunder vibrating my heart
I thought, you called my name in your heart and I got hiccups!

Because,
The breeze which I could not see
But the mad meadow danced on it's rhyme
While I pretended to ignore and not see it at all
I thought, you blow gently under my neck and I could feel your presence!

Because,
Summers moved slowly
Autumn elopes steadily
Winters slipped in between
Spring came so swiftly

Because,
Dark cloudy long night urge,
Sunny bright morning prayer,
Thundered life mustered,
Cool breeze in sigh dismay,
Missing rain embrace!


Because
Just as you softly whispered,
I got goose-bumps,
I followed your every move,
Your every said and unsaid word heartily felt
And before you could think, 'I love You too', I said!



16 comments:

  1. Well you said it yourself CELEBRATE LIFE. Wonderfully done.

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    1. Thank you so much Chèvrefeuille!
      I'm so delighted that you like it!!!

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  2. 'Summers moved slowly
    Autumn elopes steadily
    Winters slipped in between
    Spring came so swiftly'

    Splendid Imagery!

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  3. OMG... Rachana, BECAUSE I love all your BECAUSE mentioned above, I love this.. You rhymed wherever needed and your words are amazing.. Superb superb superb...........

    Someone is Special

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    1. Who else could adore & understand it more than you who is always dreaming of your dream-girl and dedicates every word of your's(post/poem imaginiation) to her....I'm so glad that the lines above could touch your heart!!
      Thankyou Thankyou Thakyou :)

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  4. nice..i got goosebumps in the reading of it...love can be so hard to expalin...i love all the natural elements in this...lovely verse...smiles.

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  5. :) OH! Brian you got the goosebumps reading this prose and it made my day!!
    Spread Smiles! Yes indeed love is so complex and yet so simple...at one end we go mad connected each and everything of our daily delight with love and on the other hand we get simple and just write what we feel...and great people thought that I'm some poet ;) Silly them...Profess I'm in love!!!That's it!!!

    Thank you for dropping me a line :)

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  6. Wooooooo.....wat have u done this time? do u've an idea?

    I'm just speechless aftr getting drenched in the rain of these lovely emotions.. :-)

    All in all I'm loving it..

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  7. again a damm awesome blog by you before valentines day . feels like the whole world is under the feet of the lovers . no 1 cn stop them from loving each other

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  8. Wonderful write. really loved this line: While I heard a rumble of loud thunder vibrating my heart
    I thought, you called my name in your heart and I got hiccups!

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