Swirl spins eddy goes the world
Curl the eye shadow deep within
Mellow down the sleek cheeks!
Sealed lips with red tone sheen;
Wavy locks, speaking scores of lines
Sweat sweet, bat your lashes
Flame under the sapphire sky
Whispering feather plea to fate
Melody mingle in every move
Standing in the shallow
Unruffled emotion crept soon
Brewing premise awhile really slow
Smile O Smile! Solar flair!!
Dousing in mystery
Stretch fragrance forever
Rising in tranquillity
Brilliant angelic young bride
Begins to believe in being
Beautiful blossoming butterfly
Heart beats truly skips acting shy
Barely reciting apprehension
Before the whole comparing impression
Beyond the promising comprehension
Committing to care and considering compassion!
Curl the eye shadow deep within
Mellow down the sleek cheeks!
Sealed lips with red tone sheen;
Wavy locks, speaking scores of lines
Sweat sweet, bat your lashes
Flame under the sapphire sky
Whispering feather plea to fate
Melody mingle in every move
Standing in the shallow
Unruffled emotion crept soon
Brewing premise awhile really slow
Smile O Smile! Solar flair!!
Dousing in mystery
Stretch fragrance forever
Rising in tranquillity
Brilliant angelic young bride
Begins to believe in being
Beautiful blossoming butterfly
Heart beats truly skips acting shy
Barely reciting apprehension
Before the whole comparing impression
Beyond the promising comprehension
Committing to care and considering compassion!
* To 'bat your lashes' is a piece of 1920s slang meaning to make eyes at someone, the idea being that the enormous false eyelashes in vogue at the time looked like bats when your eyelids fluttered.
** Beautiful picture 'young Indian Bride' is captured by very talented 'Vijay Raghavan', which actually inspired this prose! Interestingly, the prose complies exactly 111 words.
perfect !
ReplyDeleteHey, it's very nice. You should have put your picture. It would have been better.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I liked the poem. :)
Smile O Smile! Solar flair!!
ReplyDeleteDousing in mystery
Stretch fragrance forever
Rising in tranquillity
Lovely!
An apt description.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
and merry Christmas.