21 September, 2011

Catching up with bubbles

This post is dedicated to my very dear friend 'Madhulika', Oye bubbly!! :)
Spreading bliss and smiles
Soft whisper

Free fly high
Harmonious breath
Catching boom

Too and forth
Floating fleeting way
Life like froth

Delicate trembles
Little world charm in the swirl
Leading to more thrill

Peace and tranquil rays
Within soft smooth velvet wall
May compose wishes

Little mermaid waves
Busting and beginning boom
Whoosh in deepest blue

Hide and seek challenge
Playing with mini bubbles
Glee free from troubles!

The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 21 - Prompt #79 - Bubbles


  1. I like the fairy vision here...Nice

  2. You have done well here.. hope your friend enjoys the post as much as you must have enjoyed while writing it.. Keep writing...

  3. Phew! Delicate trembles is the one for me!!

  4. Lovely dedication to a charming fried!! Like the last haiku the best!! Much innocence there!!

  5. I enjoyed the progression of this poem, both from the 3-5-3 format to the 5-7-5, and from the softness of the first verse to the playful energy of the last. Well written.

  6. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!! M so so so glad on this .... Hugs to u my DEAR DUBBLY HUBBLY CHUBBLY RACHI... Yaar bas ek tu hai joh mujhe mujhse jyada pehchaanti hai..Feeling so gud in long time ... Muaah meri jaan.... I am so impressed by your ' Expression of Thoughts'.... Thanks from d bottom of my heart for sharing this write up on me with me :))))))))))))))))))... M feeling so honored now... Tussi Gr8 ho ... ♥


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