This post is dedicated to my very dear friend 'Madhulika', Oye bubbly!! :)
Surrounded
Spreading bliss and smiles
Soft whisper
Free fly high
Harmonious breath
Catching boom
Too and forth
Floating fleeting way
Life like froth
Delicate trembles
Little world charm in the swirl
Leading to more thrill
Peace and tranquil rays
Within soft smooth velvet wall
May compose wishes
Little mermaid waves
Busting and beginning boom
Whoosh in deepest blue
Hide and seek challenge
Playing with mini bubbles
Glee free from troubles!
Spreading bliss and smiles
Soft whisper
Free fly high
Harmonious breath
Catching boom
Too and forth
Floating fleeting way
Life like froth
Delicate trembles
Little world charm in the swirl
Leading to more thrill
Peace and tranquil rays
Within soft smooth velvet wall
May compose wishes
Little mermaid waves
Busting and beginning boom
Whoosh in deepest blue
Hide and seek challenge
Playing with mini bubbles
Glee free from troubles!
The Height of Haiku Challenge, Day 21 - Prompt #79 - Bubbles
I like the fairy vision here...Nice
ReplyDeleteYou have done well here.. hope your friend enjoys the post as much as you must have enjoyed while writing it.. Keep writing...
ReplyDeletePhew! Delicate trembles is the one for me!!
ReplyDeleteLovely dedication to a charming fried!! Like the last haiku the best!! Much innocence there!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the progression of this poem, both from the 3-5-3 format to the 5-7-5, and from the softness of the first verse to the playful energy of the last. Well written.
ReplyDeleteWOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!! M so so so glad on this .... Hugs to u my DEAR DUBBLY HUBBLY CHUBBLY RACHI... Yaar bas ek tu hai joh mujhe mujhse jyada pehchaanti hai..Feeling so gud in long time ... Muaah meri jaan.... I am so impressed by your ' Expression of Thoughts'.... Thanks from d bottom of my heart for sharing this write up on me with me :))))))))))))))))))... M feeling so honored now... Tussi Gr8 ho ... ♥
ReplyDeletelucky friend! lovely poem! :)
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