27 February, 2010

Hello Honey - 55fiction #06

Note: 55 Fictions is precise form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.



HELLO honey! ~ 55fiction

Since evening;
HE has made call at least seven times,
.
Desperately yet another time
he tries luck and
calls in an hour again.
.
I took the handset in my hand and..
..replied firmly,
"SHE has not yet returned home.."
.
He could not identify my voice again;
perhaps thought that he was speaking to my MOM !!


Note:
  • Have you ever tried fooling others on phone..!?
  • You might like to read more my 55fictions - HERE.
  • The above drawing is made by ME as a part and extention of  my art in...  Rachi Creations..1 ~ "Rachi Creations..2"

1st The Colors Magazine’s blog post contest “Show your best” have choose Oh what an F-word post of this blog as the Winner for the month January as for being a little bit more creative, a little bit more original, a little bit more attractive. Click the links and enjoy!

14 comments:

  1. Absolutely love it.. Tring tring.. she is here;)

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  2. @ Priya

    hehehhe...Thanks :)

    Perhaps...guys will never know..what girls want! And Woman at it's best singing.."Man! I feel like a WOman"..!


    Luv yeah always!

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  3. That was nice :P
    Btw,Have you fooled people like this on the phone?:P

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  4. This chick seems to be enjoying a lot...hhhmm.Gr8 going Rachana..waiting 4 more ... :)

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  5. @ Anu

    Glad u liked it...
    yeah...done this many a times...fortunately i got the tone and sound like mom...

    Almost a year around i enjoy sch April food days...


    Btw. Hav u do this ever?!

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  6. heheh!! kewl one!!!
    i do it too:P my mum speaks to many ppl as me:D

    very nice idea for 55 fiction!

    p.s: i have returned to bloggin!! yay!!

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  7. Classic touch....
    simple, straight but a magnum ....
    loved it....
    it bears your stamp :)

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  8. Superb!!
    very naughty indeed :)

    Loved the beautiful picture you've painted to go along with the story.

    Keep up the good work Rachana.

    Cheers!!

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  9. Very nice.This is my first visit and enjoyed the post thoroughly.
    Picture too is superb.

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  10. Oh this happens to the best of us ! especially if you re dating someone newly..

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  11. Thats a very sweet illo!And I absolutely loved HER way:))hehe...

    ps:Your comment always makes me smile...Thanks a lot for inspiring thru ur words...

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  12. Lovely !! :)) used to make a lot of crack calls when i was younger :p

    Liked the artwork too .. keep it up :)

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  13. As usually good work.


    So time to pay a toll for the same.

    Visit my page.

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  14. Congratulations for the award rachana :)You deserve the best of best..... way to go >>>>>>>

    Regards
    Suni

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